I'd say sing me off and you got my vote! ^o^
[ coming from you , this really means a lot. right back at ya , ruby ! ]
Rock On!, Open Response: GENERALLY EVERYTHING ABOUT YOUR WRITING. Okay but seriously, it flows, it's vibrant and descriptive, it puts me INTO the scenario, makes my heart beat faster and I swear I can feel the fear myself. Good on you, mate.
[ Thank you so much! It really means a lot to hear that ~ ]